Stick to Pickleball

Chapter 1: The Newsletter

The Sunset Pines Breeze was a four-page monthly newsletter printed on canary-yellow paper and distributed to every mailbox in the community by a rotating squad of volunteers who took the task more seriously than most NATO operations. It covered irrigation schedules, shuffleboard tournament brackets, a recipe column nobody read but everyone had opinions about, and the occasional passive-aggressive letter to the editor about cart path etiquette.

The November issue led with a photograph of the newly resurfaced pickleball courts.

The December issue led with a death.

DOT PASKO, 71, FOUND DECEASED IN CLUBHOUSE HOT TUB

Jean Banas read it standing at her mailbox in a bathrobe and compression socks, holding a mug of coffee that had gone cold somewhere around the second paragraph. She read it again. Then she folded the newsletter precisely in thirds, tucked it under her arm, and walked back inside her two-bedroom condo with the calm, measured stride of a woman who had spent thirty years walking into rooms where terrible things had happened to people.

She set the newsletter on her kitchen table, sat down, and called Ron Heller.

"Did you see it?" she said.

"I'm reading it now." Ron's voice had the gravelly texture of a man who had smoked for twenty years, quit for fifteen, and still sounded like he was narrating a noir film whether he wanted to or not. "Accidental drowning. Hot tub."

"Dot Pasko hated water."

"Lots of people hate water and still use hot tubs, Jean."

"Dot Pasko once fined a man forty dollars for running his sprinklers during a community walkabout because, and I quote, 'ambient moisture is an HOA liability.' She did not voluntarily submerge herself in one hundred and four degrees of chlorinated community water."

There was a pause on Ron's end. She could hear him chewing something. Probably one of those fiber bars he pretended to enjoy.

"Okay," he said. "That's a little weird."

"Her hearing aids were on the ledge."

"So she took them out before getting in. That's normal."

"They were on the right side of the ledge. Arranged neatly. Dot was left-handed, Ron. Aggressively left-handed. She once fined Gary Pomerantz for installing his mailbox flag on what she called 'the dominant wrong side.' A left-handed person sets things down to their left. It's instinct. Someone else placed those hearing aids."

Another pause. Longer this time.

"I'll be at your place in ten minutes," Ron said.

"Make it five. And bring Betsy."

"What about Stan?"

"Stan's already here. He showed up at six-thirty to tell me the HOA spent eleven percent more on holiday lighting than last year's approved budget. He's on my lanai doing math."

Ron hung up.

Jean looked out through her sliding glass door at Stan Frick, who was sitting in a wicker chair with a legal pad, a mechanical pencil, and the serene expression of a man who found genuine pleasure in reconciling line items. He was seventy-six, thin as a heron, and wore his reading glasses on a chain that he adjusted with the frequency and precision of a concert violinist tuning between movements.

"Stan," Jean said, sliding the door open. "Dot Pasko is dead."

Stan looked up. "I know. I heard about it yesterday from Phyllis Kern. Phyllis told me at the mailbox. She also told me she's already ordered new stationery for the board, which I thought was a bit hasty, but Phyllis has always had a complicated relationship with propriety."

"What do you think happened?"

"Statistically, hot tub drownings in adults over sixty-five are most commonly associated with alcohol consumption, cardiac events, or seizure disorders. Dot didn't drink, had no cardiac history that I'm aware of, and her only known medical condition was a bunion she discussed at inappropriate length during the 2022 holiday mixer."

Jean sat down across from him. "So what does that leave?"

Stan set down his pencil. He looked at her over his reading glasses with an expression that, on anyone else, might have been called excitement, but on Stan registered as a slight uptick in ambient interest.

"It leaves the interesting possibilities," he said.

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Sunset Pines was an active-adult community three miles east of Sarasota, built in the early 2000s during that strange era when developers discovered that retirees would pay premium prices for stucco boxes if you added a water feature and called the streets things like Heron's Landing Way and Tranquility Circle. It had 312 units, a clubhouse with a fitness center that smelled permanently of chlorine and optimism, two pools, a bocce court, and four pickleball courts that were the social and competitive heart of the community.

The pickleball was, by any objective measure, terrible.

Jean played because it kept her knees from rusting. Ron played because his cardiologist told him to, and because it gave him an excuse to wear the headband he'd bought on impulse at a sporting goods store and now felt committed to. Betsy Tuck played because she looked magnificent in athletic wear and knew it. Stan played because he had calculated that pickleball burned approximately 350 calories per hour and he needed to offset the butter cookies his neighbor kept bringing over.

They played every Tuesday at nine o'clock on Court Three, which had a slight crack in the southwest corner that Jean had reported to the HOA seven times without response. Their games were characterized by enthusiastic effort, creative profanity, and a collective skill level that would have made any actual pickleball player weep.

But the gossip was world-class.

Betsy Tuck arrived at Jean's condo at the same time as Ron, stepping out of her golf cart in white capris, a coral cardigan, and sunglasses that belonged on a woman leaving a yacht in Monaco. She was seventy-two, had been a working actress for thirty-one years — mostly daytime television, with a recurring arc on a soap opera where she had died, come back as a twin, died again, and then appeared in a dream sequence that ran for six episodes — and she possessed the single most useful skill in any retirement community: people told her things.

They told her things because she listened like they were the most fascinating person she had ever met. She leaned in. She touched their arm. She said "No!" at exactly the right moments. She remembered details. She asked follow-up questions. She was, in short, a professional at making people feel interesting, and in a community where most conversations were about medications, grandchildren, and the declining quality of restaurant bread, that skill was currency.

"Dot Pasko," Betsy said, settling into Jean's living room with the practiced grace of someone who had once played a duchess for eleven episodes. "Dead in the hot tub. I have thoughts."

"We all have thoughts," Ron said. He was sixty-nine, the youngest of the group, and carried himself with the slightly rumpled authority of a man who had spent decades catching people who lied about house fires and fake back injuries. His divorce, three years old now, had left him with a two-bedroom condo, a subscription to every streaming service, and a loneliness he managed by staying busy and pretending he wasn't managing anything. "The question is whether our thoughts are worth anything."

"My thoughts are always worth something," Betsy said. "I once had a thought about my co-star's husband that turned out to be entirely correct, and it was on the cover of three magazines."

"This isn't a soap opera, Betsy."

"Everything is a soap opera, Ronald. Some of them just have better lighting."

Jean held up the newsletter. "Here's what we know. Dot was found Tuesday morning by Tony Rivas, the groundskeeper. She was in the hot tub. The sheriff's office responded. A Detective Mott has been assigned. The newsletter says accidental drowning."

"The newsletter also said the book club's pick for January is a 'lighthearted romp,' and it's about the Armenian genocide," Stan said from the lanai doorway. "The newsletter is not a reliable source."

"Who's Detective Mott?" Ron asked.

"Lisa Mott. She's out of the Sarasota County sheriff's office. Young. Maybe mid-thirties. I saw her at the clubhouse yesterday when they were finishing up. She seemed competent but fast. She wants this closed."

"Can you blame her?" Ron said. "Seventy-one-year-old woman found in a hot tub. No signs of forced entry. No witnesses. The easy answer is usually the right one."

Jean fixed him with a look that had, over three decades, preceded roughly four hundred arrests. "The easy answer is the lazy answer, Ron. You know that better than anyone. How many insurance claims did you approve because they looked clean on the surface?"

"None. That's why I'm good at my job."

"Were. Good at your job."

"Thanks, Jean. That's warm."

"I'm not warm. I'm right. Dot didn't accidentally drown. Someone put her in that water, and someone held her there."

The room got quiet. Outside, a mourning dove was doing its thing on Jean's gutter, which was the most on-the-nose sound effect nature had ever provided.

"So what do you want to do about it?" Betsy asked.

Jean looked at each of them in turn. Stan, with his legal pad and his love of numbers that didn't add up. Ron, with his fraud investigator's nose for stories that smelled wrong. Betsy, with her talent for extracting confessions over white wine and cheese cubes.

And herself. Seventy-four years old. Thirty years in Cleveland homicide. Eleven years of retirement that had been comfortable and safe and so numbingly boring that she had started treating package thefts like RICO cases.

"I want to find out who killed her," Jean said. "And I want to do it before that detective files her report and moves on to something she considers more important than a dead retiree in a hot tub."

Ron rubbed his face. "Jean. We're not cops. We're not even young."

"We're experienced."

"That's a polite word for old."

"It's an accurate word for qualified. Between the four of us, we have over a hundred and twenty years of professional experience in investigation, interrogation, financial analysis, and—" She looked at Betsy.

"Performance under pressure," Betsy said without hesitation. "I once delivered a monologue about my character's secret baby while a lighting rig was actively falling. The director said it was my best work."

Jean nodded as if this were entirely relevant. "We need a cover. We can't just go around asking questions. People will talk."

"People already talk," Betsy said. "That's all they do. That and complain about the pool temperature."

"We need a reason to meet. Regularly. Without raising suspicion."

Stan cleared his throat. "The community activities board has been requesting proposals for new clubs and committees. I believe there's an open slot for a water aerobics planning committee. No one has applied because no one wants to plan water aerobics."

"Perfect," Jean said.

"I'm not getting in a pool," Ron said.

"You don't have to get in a pool. We're planning water aerobics. Planning is a desk activity."

"What are we actually calling ourselves?" Betsy asked.

Jean considered this for approximately two seconds. "The Sunset Pines Pickleball and Homicide Society."

"That's not subtle," Ron said.

"It doesn't have to be subtle. It just has to be ours."

Stan wrote it down on his legal pad, underlined it twice, and added a small notation in the margin that probably indicated the tax implications of forming an unofficial club.

The Society was born.

And somewhere in Sunset Pines, someone who had drowned a woman and gotten away with it was going about their Tuesday like nothing had happened.